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The thick air made the ground dust

Cacti and a snake鈥檚 tongue lead to nothingness

Particles of sand rise to high depths

The summer is dry, leaving no breath

Skies overhead play tricks with insects

Endless blue confuses these little specs

Hundreds huddle to sweat little tears

To feed the young who hold all fear

For they shall grow and become apart

Of this deadly land which holds no art

The flowers are gone, and sunshine hurts,

The working class of a tranquil desert

When sorrow comes and takes them all

The wind shall fly, to make its call

The storm has come to bring back faith

To the remaining life of this horrid place

POEM READ IT comment?sunshine

Actually, this is pretty good nature poem. It's fairly well written, has effective imagery, and it sets up the tone of a desolate and barren place quite nicely.

Keep writing.:)

POEM READ IT comment?star theater opera theater

nice filled with pain and sadness but i love it
wow if you wrote then wow your realy good and i no good poems when i see them i have been winning poem compititions for a while now i no if you would enter it you would just how you were so discripted and wow it was really good!good job
I like it..
Wow, you're good.
OOooh, I like it! I am really into poetry, people say I am a deep kinda person..and I like your poem, how it describes summer..in such an in depth kinda way! Good Job! keep up the good work! ^.~*
This is actually very good

Alot of deep language

I would be proud of this poem if i was you